[pve-devel] [PATCH docs 1/6] Rewrite: getting-help

[Aaron Lauterer]

Polished the phrasing in order to make it easer to read and understand.

Signed-off-by: Aaron Lauterer <a.lauterer at proxmox.com>
---
 getting-help.adoc | 31 +++++++++++++++----------------
 1 file changed, 15 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-)

diff --git a/getting-help.adoc b/getting-help.adoc
index 850d7a3..f2ac532 100644
--- a/getting-help.adoc
+++ b/getting-help.adoc
@@ -9,18 +9,17 @@ endif::wiki[]
 Proxmox VE Wiki
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
-The primary source of information is the {webwiki}. It combines the reference
-documentation with user contributed content.
+The primary source of information is the {webwiki}. It combines the 
+reference documentation with user contributed content.
 
 
 Community Support Forum
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
-{pve} itself is fully open source, so we always encourage our users to
-discuss and share their knowledge using the {forum}. The forum is fully
-moderated by the Proxmox support team, and has a quite large user base
-around the whole world. Needless to say that such a large forum is a
-great place to get information.
+We always encourage our users to discuss and share their knowledge
+using the {forum}. The forum is moderated by the Proxmox support 
+team. The large user base is spread out all over the world. Needless 
+to say that such a large forum is a great place to get information.
 
 Mailing Lists
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~
@@ -34,7 +33,7 @@ community
 
 The primary communication channel for developers is:
 
-* Mailing list for developer:
+* Mailing list for developers:
   http://pve.proxmox.com/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/pve-devel[PVE
   development discussion]
 
@@ -43,10 +42,10 @@ Commercial Support
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
 {proxmoxGmbh} also offers commercial 
-https://www.proxmox.com/en/proxmox-ve/pricing[{pve} Subscription Service
-Plans]. System Administrators with a standard subscription plan can access a 
-dedicated support portal with guaranteed response time, where {pve}
-developers help them should an issue appear.
+https://www.proxmox.com/en/proxmox-ve/pricing[{pve} Subscription 
+Service Plans]. System Administrators with a standard subscription 
+plan can access a dedicated support portal where {pve} developers will
+help them with a guaranteed response time should any issues appear.
 Please contact the mailto:office at proxmox.com[Proxmox sales
 team] for more information or volume discounts.
 
@@ -54,7 +53,7 @@ team] for more information or volume discounts.
 Bug Tracker
 ~~~~~~~~~~~
 
-We also run a public bug tracker at
-https://bugzilla.proxmox.com. If you ever detect an issue, you can
-file a bug report there. This makes it easy to track its status, and
-you will get notified as soon as the problem is fixed.
+{pve} runs a public bug tracker at https://bugzilla.proxmox.com. Bug
+reports can be files there should any issues appear. The bug tracker 
+helps to keep track of the bug and will send a notification once it 
+has been resolved.
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