[pve-devel] [PATCH docs] Rewrite: intro

[Dominic Jäger]

Looks good to me. I like that you removed the "you"s. Sounds more 
professional in my opinion.

On 6/12/19 3:51 PM, Aaron Lauterer wrote:
> +controls for manage a cluster.
controls to manage
> +restore jobs, live-migration of virtual machines or high availability

No hyphen (see all the references [0] or our homepage[1]). Found this 
issue in existing documentation [2] as well.

[0] https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Live_migration

[1] https://www.proxmox.com/en/proxmox-ve/features

[2] https://pve.proxmox.com/wiki/Network_Configuration


> +The Proxmox VE storage model is very flexible.Virtual machines
{pve}
> +storage can either be local on the host or one of the many storage
> +technologies available on Debian Linux. A complete list of supported
Something with "or remote" is missing as contrast to "local"
> +live-migration of running machines without any downtime, as all nodes
No hyphen.
> +* LVM Group (network backed with iSCSI targets)
backed by
> +The ingegrated backup tool (`vzdump`) creates backups of running
integrated
> +When running as a multi-node cluster Proxmox VE HA Cluster offers
{pve}
>   
> +world these bridges are attached for physical network interfaces.
attached to
>   
> +The project started in 2007, followed by the first stable version in
> +2008. At the time used OpenVZ has been used for containers, and KVM
At the time OpenVZ was used
> +for virtual machines. The clustering features were limited, and the
> +user interface were simple (server generated web page).
interface was simple
> +in JSON-Schema. This enabled other people to integrate Proxmox VE into
{pve}