[pve-devel] applied: [PATCH docs] minor improvements to installation

[Thomas Lamprecht]

On 11/26/18 11:08 AM, Oguz Bektas wrote:
> Signed-off-by: Oguz Bektas <o.bektas at proxmox.com>
> ---
>  pve-installation.adoc | 10 +++++-----
>  1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/pve-installation.adoc b/pve-installation.adoc
> index 0c05384..14d51e8 100644
> --- a/pve-installation.adoc
> +++ b/pve-installation.adoc
> @@ -31,8 +31,8 @@ endif::wiki[]
>  Using the {pve} Installation CD-ROM
>  -----------------------------------
> 
> -You can download the ISO from {website}. It includes the
> -following:
> +You can download the ISO from {website}en/downloads.
> +It includes the following:
> 
>  * Complete operating system (Debian Linux, 64-bit)
> 
> @@ -46,8 +46,8 @@ following:
> 
>  * Web based management interface for using the toolset
> 
> -NOTE: By default, the complete server is used and all existing data is
> -removed.
> +NOTE: During the installation process, the complete server
> +is used by default and all existing data is removed.
> 
>  [thumbnail="screenshot/pve-grub-menu.png"]
> 
> @@ -286,7 +286,7 @@ configuration is also completely up to you.
>  In general, this is not trivial, especially when you use LVM or
>  ZFS.
> 
> -You can find a detailed step by step howto on the
> +You can find a detailed step by step how-to guide on the
>  {webwiki-url}Install_Proxmox_VE_on_Debian_Stretch[wiki].
> 
>  include::pve-usbstick.adoc[]
> 

applied, thanks!