[pve-devel] [PATCH docs] minor improvements to installation

Oguz Bektas o.bektas at proxmox.com
Mon Nov 26 11:08:48 CET 2018


Signed-off-by: Oguz Bektas <o.bektas at proxmox.com>
---
 pve-installation.adoc | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/pve-installation.adoc b/pve-installation.adoc
index 0c05384..14d51e8 100644
--- a/pve-installation.adoc
+++ b/pve-installation.adoc
@@ -31,8 +31,8 @@ endif::wiki[]
 Using the {pve} Installation CD-ROM
 -----------------------------------

-You can download the ISO from {website}. It includes the
-following:
+You can download the ISO from {website}en/downloads.
+It includes the following:

 * Complete operating system (Debian Linux, 64-bit)

@@ -46,8 +46,8 @@ following:

 * Web based management interface for using the toolset

-NOTE: By default, the complete server is used and all existing data is
-removed.
+NOTE: During the installation process, the complete server
+is used by default and all existing data is removed.

 [thumbnail="screenshot/pve-grub-menu.png"]

@@ -286,7 +286,7 @@ configuration is also completely up to you.
 In general, this is not trivial, especially when you use LVM or
 ZFS.

-You can find a detailed step by step howto on the
+You can find a detailed step by step how-to guide on the
 {webwiki-url}Install_Proxmox_VE_on_Debian_Stretch[wiki].

 include::pve-usbstick.adoc[]
-- 
2.11.0





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