[pve-devel] [PATCH 1/2] minor wording improvements/corrections

[Wolfgang Bumiller]

On Fri, Dec 28, 2018 at 12:30:28PM +0100, Oguz Bektas wrote:
> Signed-off-by: Oguz Bektas <o.bektas at proxmox.com>
> ---
>  pve-gui.adoc | 12 ++++++------
>  1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/pve-gui.adoc b/pve-gui.adoc
> index 9c282bb..1b652b4 100644
> --- a/pve-gui.adoc
> +++ b/pve-gui.adoc
> @@ -258,11 +258,11 @@ All belongs of a node can be managed at this level.
>  
>  * *Summary:* gives a brief overview over the resource usage.
>  
> -* *Shell:* log you in the shell of the node.
> +* *Shell:* logs you in the shell of the node.

Maybe also `in` -> `into`?

>  
>  * *System:* is for configuring the network, dns and time, and also shows your syslog.
>  
> -* *Updates:* will upgrade the system and informs you about new packets.
> +* *Updates:* will upgrade the system and inform you about new packets.
>  
>  * *Firewall:* on this level is only for this node.
>  
> @@ -273,7 +273,7 @@ All belongs of a node can be managed at this level.
>     host. Then you can manage your Ceph cluster and see the status
>     of it here.
>  
> -* *Task History:* here all past task are shown.
> +* *Task History:* here all past tasks are shown.
>  
>  * *Subscription:* here you can upload you subscription key and get a
>     system overview in case of a support case.
> @@ -312,9 +312,9 @@ All available options are listed one below the other.
>  
>  * *(LXC)DNS:* the LXC DNS settings.
>  
> -* *Options:* all VM options can be set here, this distinguishes between KVM and LXC.
> +* *Options:* all VM options can be set here, these change between KVM and LXC.

Maybe just say 'all guest options can be set here'?
This seems to be mostly bikeshedding anyway.

>  
> -* *Task History:* here all previous task from this VM will be shown.
> +* *Task History:* here will all previous task from this VM be shown.

That sounds off. There's too much weight on the object to split off the
auxiliary word like that.

(I also wondering whether the 4 cases of '_this_ VM' should be replaced
with 'the selected guest'?)

>  
>  * *(KVM) Monitor:* is the interactive communication interface to the KVM process.
>  
> @@ -334,7 +334,7 @@ Storage
>  
>  [thumbnail="screenshot/gui-storage-summary-local.png"]
>  
> -In this view we have a two partition split view.
> +In this view we have a two partition split-view.
>  On the left side we have the storage options
>  and on the right side the content of the selected option will be shown.
>  
> -- 
> 2.11.0