[pve-devel] applied: [PATCH docs] Fix 7 typos and rephrase a sentence

Wolfgang Bumiller w.bumiller at proxmox.com
Fri Dec 28 10:24:08 CET 2018


applied

On Thu, Dec 27, 2018 at 09:56:13AM +0100, Stoiko Ivanov wrote:
> Reported via support ticket by Daniel A. Maierhofer <pve at damadmai.at>.
> 
> Signed-off-by: Stoiko Ivanov <s.ivanov at proxmox.com>
> ---
>  pve-gui.adoc  | 16 ++++++++--------
>  sysadmin.adoc |  2 +-
>  2 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/pve-gui.adoc b/pve-gui.adoc
> index 78a2294..844547b 100644
> --- a/pve-gui.adoc
> +++ b/pve-gui.adoc
> @@ -269,7 +269,7 @@ All belongs of a node can be managed at this level.
>  * *Disk:* gives you an brief overview about you physical hard drives and
>     how they are used.
>  
> -* *Ceph:* is only used if you have installed a Ceph sever on you
> +* *Ceph:* is only used if you have installed a Ceph server on your
>     host. Then you can manage your Ceph cluster and see the status
>     of it here.
>  
> @@ -286,16 +286,16 @@ Guests
>  
>  There are two differed kinds of VM types and both types can be converted to a template.
>  One of them are Kernel-based Virtual Machine (KVM) and the other one are Linux Containers (LXC).
> -General the navigation are the same only some option are different.
> +General the navigation are the same only some options are different.
>  
> -In the main management center the VM navigation begin if a VM is selected in the left tree.
> +In the main management center the VM navigation begins if a VM is selected in the left tree.
>  
>  The top header contains important VM operation commands like 'Start', 'Shutdown', 'Reset',
>  'Remove', 'Migrate', 'Console' and 'Help'.
>  Some of them have hidden buttons like 'Shutdown' has 'Stop' and
>  'Console' contains the different console types 'SPICE', 'noVNC' and 'xterm.js'.
>  
> -On the right side the content switch white the focus of the option.
> +On the right side the content switches depending on the selected option.
>  
>  On the left side.
>  All available options are listed one below the other.
> @@ -336,12 +336,12 @@ Storage
>  
>  In this view we have a two partition split view.
>  On the left side we have the storage options
> -and on the right side the content of the selected option will shown.
> +and on the right side the content of the selected option will be shown.
>  
> -* *Summary:* show you important information about your storage like
> +* *Summary:* shows you important information about your storage like
>  'Usage', 'Type', 'Content', 'Active' and 'Enabled'.
>  
> -* *Content:* Here all contend will listed grouped by content.
> +* *Content:* Here all content will listed grouped by content type.
>  
>  * *Permissions:* manage the user permission for this storage.
>  
> @@ -353,7 +353,7 @@ Pools
>  
>  In this view we have a two partition split view.
>  On the left side we have the logical pool options
> -and on the right side the content of the selected option will shown.
> +and on the right side the content of the selected option will be shown.
>  
>  * *Summary:* show the description of the pool.
>  
> diff --git a/sysadmin.adoc b/sysadmin.adoc
> index 0ba4bf1..5a49d2d 100644
> --- a/sysadmin.adoc
> +++ b/sysadmin.adoc
> @@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ For example, we ship Intel network card drivers to support their
>  newest hardware.
>  
>  The following sections will concentrate on virtualization related
> -topics. They either explains things which are different on {pve}, or
> +topics. They either explain things which are different on {pve}, or
>  tasks which are commonly used on {pve}. For other topics, please refer
>  to the standard Debian documentation.
>  
> -- 
> 2.11.0




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