[pve-devel] [PATCH docs] installation: reword `nomodeset` section a bit, add link to it

[Christoph Heiss]

Thanks for the review!

On Mon, Feb 26, 2024 at 12:27:13PM +0100, Stefan Sterz wrote:
> On Mon Feb 26, 2024 at 12:20 PM CET, Christoph Heiss wrote:
[..]
> > +[[nomodeset_kernel_param]]
> >  Adding the `nomodeset` Kernel Parameter
> >  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
> >
> >  Problems may arise on very old or very new hardware due to graphics drivers. If
> > -the installation hangs during the boot. In that case, you can try adding the
> > -`nomodeset` parameter. This prevents the Linux kernel from loading any
> > -graphics drivers and forces it to continue using the BIOS/UEFI-provided
> > -framebuffer.
> > +the installation hangs during the boot, you can try adding the `nomodeset`
> > +parameter. This prevents the Linux kernel from loading any graphics drivers and
> > +forces it to continue using the BIOS/UEFI-provided framebuffer.
> >
>
> nit: "the installation hangs during the boot" doesn't require that
> "the". imo "If the installation hangs during boot, you can..."

Yep, sounds indeed better. I'll send a v2.

>
> otherwise sounds good to me
>
> >  On the {pve} bootloader menu, navigate to 'Install {pve} (Terminal UI)' and
> >  press `e` to edit the entry. Using the arrow keys, navigate to the line starting
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