[pve-devel] [PATCH docs 0/9] Documentation overhaul chapt. 1.9 to 3.2

Aaron Lauterer a.lauterer at proxmox.com
Tue Sep 10 11:21:57 CEST 2019


This is the first patch series aimed to overhaul our documentation. The
main goal is to make it easier to understand and more consistent.
Therefore the phrasing is changed in a lot of places, sometimes the
ordering of content as well. I tried to align the source to the 80
characters per line wherever possible.

Even though it was agreed with Fabian for him to proof read it on a
technical level everyone please give feedback if you find technical
errors or outdated information and of course typos :).

The reason why this first patch series doesn't start at the very
beginning is because we are not yet happy with few things there.

Aaron Lauterer (9):
  Rewrite Getting Help
  Rewrite Improve PVE Docs
  Rewrite Translation
  Rewrite Installation
  Rewrite System Requirements
  Rewrite Install from USB flash drive
  Rewrite Sysadmin
  Rewrite Package Repositories
  Rewrite System Software Updates

 getting-help.adoc            |  42 +++---
 howto-improve-pve-docs.adoc  |  42 +++---
 pve-installation.adoc        | 278 +++++++++++++++++------------------
 pve-package-repos.adoc       | 154 +++++++++----------
 pve-system-requirements.adoc |  69 ++++-----
 pve-usbstick.adoc            | 109 +++++++-------
 sysadmin.adoc                |  40 ++---
 system-software-updates.adoc |  25 ++--
 translation.adoc             |  38 ++---
 9 files changed, 388 insertions(+), 407 deletions(-)

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2.20.1




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