[pve-devel] [PATCH docs 03/10] Rewrite System Software Updates

[Aaron Lauterer]

Polished phrasing and aligned CLI command styling

Signed-off-by: Aaron Lauterer <a.lauterer at proxmox.com>
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 system-software-updates.adoc | 28 +++++++++++++++-------------
 1 file changed, 15 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)

diff --git a/system-software-updates.adoc b/system-software-updates.adoc
index 04c17f3..50f8c8e 100644
--- a/system-software-updates.adoc
+++ b/system-software-updates.adoc
@@ -4,21 +4,23 @@ ifdef::wiki[]
 :pve-toplevel:
 endif::wiki[]
 
-We provide regular package updates on all repositories. You can
-install those update using the GUI, or you can directly run the CLI
-command `apt-get`:
+Updates are provided on a regular basis for all repositories. Updates
+can be installed via the GUI or by running the following commands on
+the CLI:
 
- apt-get update
- apt-get dist-upgrade
+----
+# apt-get update
+# apt-get dist-upgrade
+----
 
-NOTE: The `apt` package management system is extremely flexible and
-provides countless of feature - see `man apt-get` or <<Hertzog13>> for
+NOTE: The APT package management system is very flexible and
+provides many features - see `man apt-get` or <<Hertzog13>> for
 additional information.
 
-You should do such updates at regular intervals, or when we release
-versions with security related fixes. Major system upgrades are
-announced at the {forum}. Those announcement also contain detailed
-upgrade instructions.
+Updates should be installed on a regular basis. This applies even more
+so to security related updates. Major system upgrades are announced in
+the {forum}. These announcements contain detailed upgrade
+instructions.
 
-TIP: We recommend to run regular upgrades, because it is important to
-get the latest security updates.
+TIP: It is recommended to update {pve} on a regular basis in order to
+have the latest security updates installed.
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