[pmg-devel] [PATCH docs] pmg-intro: minor grammar and structure fixes

[Aaron Lauterer]

LGTM

Reviewed-By: Aaron Lauterer <a.lauterer at proxmox.com>

On 4/20/20 3:17 PM, Oguz Bektas wrote:
> Signed-off-by: Oguz Bektas <o.bektas at proxmox.com>
> ---
>   pmg-intro.adoc | 14 ++++++++------
>   1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/pmg-intro.adoc b/pmg-intro.adoc
> index 41e54c6..e43fd6e 100644
> --- a/pmg-intro.adoc
> +++ b/pmg-intro.adoc
> @@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ SMTP Protocol Tests::
>   `man postscreen`). Most spam is sent out by zombies (malware on
>   compromised end-user computers), and those zombies often try to
>   maximize the amount of mails delivered. In order to do that, many of
> -them violates the SMTP protocol specification and can thus be detected
> +them violate the SMTP protocol specification and thus can get detected
>   by these tests.
>   
>   Before and After Queue Filtering::
> @@ -170,8 +170,8 @@ of e-mails and generating notifications.
>   Spam Quarantine
>   ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
>   
> -Identified Spam mails can be stored to the user accessible Spam
> -quarantine. Thus users can view and manage there Spam mails by
> +Identified Spam mails can be stored to the user-accessible Spam
> +quarantine. Thus, users can view and manage their Spam mails by
>   themselves.
>   
>   
> @@ -179,8 +179,8 @@ Tracking and Logging
>   ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
>   
>   The innovative Proxmox Message Tracking Center tracks and summarizes
> -all available logs. With the web-based and user friendly management
> -interface, the IT admins can easily overview and control all
> +all available logs. With the web-based and user-friendly management
> +interface, IT admins can easily overview and control all
>   functions from a single screen.
>   
>   The Message Tracking Center is very fast and powerful, tested on {pmg}
> @@ -188,6 +188,8 @@ sites processing over a million emails per day. All different log
>   files from the last 7 days can be queried and the results are
>   summarized by an intelligent algorithm.
>   
> +The logged information includes:
> +
>   - Arrival of the email
>   - Proxmox filtering processing with results
>   - Internal queue to your email server
> @@ -228,7 +230,7 @@ Fetchmail integration
>   Flexible User Management
>   ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
>   
> -The administration interface uses a role based access control scheme,
> +The administration interface uses a role-based access control scheme,
>   using the following roles:
>   
>   Superuser::
>