[pmg-devel] [PATCH docs] pmg-intro: minor grammar and structure fixes

[Stoiko Ivanov]

Thanks for the patch! LGTM

Reviewed-By: Stoiko Ivanov <s.ivanov at proxmox.com>

On Mon, 20 Apr 2020 15:17:21 +0200
Oguz Bektas <o.bektas at proxmox.com> wrote:

> Signed-off-by: Oguz Bektas <o.bektas at proxmox.com>
> ---
>  pmg-intro.adoc | 14 ++++++++------
>  1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/pmg-intro.adoc b/pmg-intro.adoc
> index 41e54c6..e43fd6e 100644
> --- a/pmg-intro.adoc
> +++ b/pmg-intro.adoc
> @@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ SMTP Protocol Tests::
>  `man postscreen`). Most spam is sent out by zombies (malware on
>  compromised end-user computers), and those zombies often try to
>  maximize the amount of mails delivered. In order to do that, many of
> -them violates the SMTP protocol specification and can thus be detected
> +them violate the SMTP protocol specification and thus can get detected
>  by these tests.
>  
>  Before and After Queue Filtering::
> @@ -170,8 +170,8 @@ of e-mails and generating notifications.
>  Spam Quarantine
>  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
>  
> -Identified Spam mails can be stored to the user accessible Spam
> -quarantine. Thus users can view and manage there Spam mails by
> +Identified Spam mails can be stored to the user-accessible Spam
> +quarantine. Thus, users can view and manage their Spam mails by
>  themselves.
>  
>  
> @@ -179,8 +179,8 @@ Tracking and Logging
>  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
>  
>  The innovative Proxmox Message Tracking Center tracks and summarizes
> -all available logs. With the web-based and user friendly management
> -interface, the IT admins can easily overview and control all
> +all available logs. With the web-based and user-friendly management
> +interface, IT admins can easily overview and control all
>  functions from a single screen.
>  
>  The Message Tracking Center is very fast and powerful, tested on {pmg}
> @@ -188,6 +188,8 @@ sites processing over a million emails per day. All different log
>  files from the last 7 days can be queried and the results are
>  summarized by an intelligent algorithm.
>  
> +The logged information includes:
> +
>  - Arrival of the email
>  - Proxmox filtering processing with results
>  - Internal queue to your email server
> @@ -228,7 +230,7 @@ Fetchmail integration
>  Flexible User Management
>  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
>  
> -The administration interface uses a role based access control scheme,
> +The administration interface uses a role-based access control scheme,
>  using the following roles:
>  
>  Superuser::