[pbs-devel] [PATCH proxmox-backup 1/2] docs: language and formatting fixup

[Dylan Whyte]

On 10/8/21 6:59 AM, Dietmar Maurer wrote:
> some questions below:
>
> On 10/6/21 5:19 PM, Dylan Whyte wrote:
>> --- a/docs/installation.rst
>> +++ b/docs/installation.rst
>> @@ -19,24 +19,24 @@ for various management tasks such as disk 
>> management.
>>      `Proxmox Backup`_ without the server part.
>
> We use `Proxmox Backup`_ here (which is defined in epilog.rst)
>
>>   The disk image (ISO file) provided by Proxmox includes a complete 
>> Debian system
>> -as well as all necessary packages for the `Proxmox Backup`_ server.
>> +as well as all necessary packages for the `Proxmox Backup Server`_.
>>     The installer will guide you through the setup process and allow
>> -you to partition the local disk(s), apply basic system configurations
>> -(e.g. timezone, language, network), and install all required packages.
>> +you to partition the local disk(s), apply basic system configuration
>> +(for example timezone, language, network), and install all required 
>> packages.
>>   The provided ISO will get you started in just a few minutes, and is 
>> the
>>   recommended method for new and existing users.
>>   -Alternatively, `Proxmox Backup`_ server can be installed on top of an
>> +Alternatively, `Proxmox Backup Server`_ can be installed on top of an
>
> So why do you change that here? Where is `Proxmox Backup Server`_ 
> defined?

Ah that's my bad. I update the epilog.rst as I thought it made more 
sense to have the hyperlink cover the full name of the product, but i 
forgot to include it with the patch..

Will fix it in a v2.

>
>
Dylan