[pbs-devel] [PATCH proxmox-backup 1/2] docs: language and formatting fixup

Dietmar Maurer dietmar at proxmox.com
Fri Oct 8 06:59:54 CEST 2021


some questions below:

On 10/6/21 5:19 PM, Dylan Whyte wrote:
> --- a/docs/installation.rst
> +++ b/docs/installation.rst
> @@ -19,24 +19,24 @@ for various management tasks such as disk management.
>      `Proxmox Backup`_ without the server part.

We use `Proxmox Backup`_ here (which is defined in epilog.rst)

>   The disk image (ISO file) provided by Proxmox includes a complete Debian system
> -as well as all necessary packages for the `Proxmox Backup`_ server.
> +as well as all necessary packages for the `Proxmox Backup Server`_.
>   
>   The installer will guide you through the setup process and allow
> -you to partition the local disk(s), apply basic system configurations
> -(e.g. timezone, language, network), and install all required packages.
> +you to partition the local disk(s), apply basic system configuration
> +(for example timezone, language, network), and install all required packages.
>   The provided ISO will get you started in just a few minutes, and is the
>   recommended method for new and existing users.
>   
> -Alternatively, `Proxmox Backup`_ server can be installed on top of an
> +Alternatively, `Proxmox Backup Server`_ can be installed on top of an

So why do you change that here? Where is `Proxmox Backup Server`_ defined?






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