[pve-devel] [PATCH docs v3 3/5] installation: lvm-options: improve & align wording with pmg-docs

[Christoph Heiss]

These changes are the result of basically "diffing" both documentations,
choosing the better prased/sounding sections. Some wording were also
slightly changed as necessary to further improve them.

The equivalent changes will be done for pmg-docs too, to ensure they are
really the same in the end.

Signed-off-by: Christoph Heiss <c.heiss at proxmox.com>
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Changes v1 -> v2:
  * none

Changes v2 -> v3:
  * none

 pve-installation.adoc | 9 +++++----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/pve-installation.adoc b/pve-installation.adoc
index cba3b58..eaa800f 100644
--- a/pve-installation.adoc
+++ b/pve-installation.adoc
@@ -245,8 +245,8 @@ Advanced LVM Configuration Options
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

 The installer creates a Volume Group (VG) called `pve`, and additional Logical
-Volumes (LVs) called `root`, `data`, and `swap`. To control the size of these
-volumes use:
+Volumes (LVs) called `root`, `data`, and `swap`, if `ext4` or `xfs` is used. To
+control the size of these volumes use:

 `hdsize`::

@@ -284,8 +284,9 @@ configuration will be adapted accordingly.

 `minfree`::

-Defines the amount of free space left in the LVM volume group `pve`. With more
-than 128GB storage available the default is 16GB, else `hdsize/8` will be used.
+Defines the amount of free space that should be left in the LVM volume group
+`pmg`. With more than 128GB storage available, the default is 16GB, otherwise
+`hdsize/8` will be used.
 +
 NOTE: LVM requires free space in the VG for snapshot creation (not required for
 lvmthin snapshots).
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