[pve-devel] [PATCH docs 5/9] package-repos: align wording with pmg-docs

[Christoph Heiss]

On Tue, Mar 05, 2024 at 09:28:21AM +0100, Gabriel Goller wrote:
> On Mon Mar 4, 2024 at 2:22 PM CET, Christoph Heiss wrote:
> >  The `root at pam` user is notified via email about available updates. Click the
> >  'Changelog' button in the GUI to see more details about the selected update.
> >
> > -You need a valid subscription key to access the `pve-enterprise` repository.
> > -Different support levels are available. Further details can be found at
> > -{pricing-url}.
> > +As soon as updates are available, the `root at pam` user is notified via email
> > +about the newly available packages. From the GUI, the 'Changelog' button in the
> > +GUI can be used to see more details about the selected update.
> > +Thus, you will never miss important security fixes.
>
> The section about the 'Changelog' button is duplicated, it is already in
> the paragraph above.
> Also `GUI` appears twice in the same sentence, I would propose something
> like this (if we use the second sentence):
>
>     The 'Changelog' button in the GUI can be used to see more
>     details about the selected update.
>

Yep, both paragraphs can indeed be a bit de-duplicated, will do!

Thanks!