[pve-devel] [PATCH docs 5/9] package-repos: align wording with pmg-docs

[Christoph Heiss]

These are phrased better and more expansive in pmg-docs, so take them
from there and only slightly adapt naming as needed.

Signed-off-by: Christoph Heiss <c.heiss at proxmox.com>
---
 pve-package-repos.adoc | 18 ++++++++++++------
 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/pve-package-repos.adoc b/pve-package-repos.adoc
index b0c2a95..1f23078 100644
--- a/pve-package-repos.adoc
+++ b/pve-package-repos.adoc
@@ -69,9 +69,14 @@ deb https://enterprise.proxmox.com/debian/pve bookworm pve-enterprise
 The `root at pam` user is notified via email about available updates. Click the
 'Changelog' button in the GUI to see more details about the selected update.
 
-You need a valid subscription key to access the `pve-enterprise` repository.
-Different support levels are available. Further details can be found at
-{pricing-url}.
+As soon as updates are available, the `root at pam` user is notified via email
+about the newly available packages. From the GUI, the 'Changelog' button in the
+GUI can be used to see more details about the selected update.
+Thus, you will never miss important security fixes.
+
+Please note that you need a valid subscription key to access the
+`pve-enterprise` repository. We offer different support levels, which you can
+find further details about at {pricing-url}.
 
 NOTE: You can disable this repository by commenting out the above line using a
 `#` (at the start of the line). This prevents error messages if your host does
@@ -82,9 +87,10 @@ repository in that case.
 {pve} No-Subscription Repository
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
-This is the recommended repository for testing and non-production use. Its
-packages are not as heavily tested and validated. You don't need a subscription key
-to access the `pve-no-subscription` repository.
+As the name suggests, you do not need a subscription key to access
+this repository. It can be used for testing and non-production
+use. It's not recommended to use this on production servers, as these
+packages are not always heavily tested and validated.
 
 We recommend to configure this repository in `/etc/apt/sources.list`.
 
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