[pve-devel] applied: [PATCH docs] pve-network: correct language errors

Fiona Ebner f.ebner at proxmox.com
Tue Aug 13 15:58:54 CEST 2024


Am 13.08.24 um 15:57 schrieb Fiona Ebner:
> Am 13.08.24 um 12:23 schrieb Alexander Zeidler:
>> Signed-off-by: Alexander Zeidler <a.zeidler at proxmox.com>
>> ---
>>  pve-network.adoc | 4 ++--
>>  1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
>>
>> diff --git a/pve-network.adoc b/pve-network.adoc
>> index acdcf39..434430d 100644
>> --- a/pve-network.adoc
>> +++ b/pve-network.adoc
>> @@ -447,7 +447,7 @@ slaves in the single logical bonded interface such that different
>>  network-peers use different MAC addresses for their network packet
>>  traffic.
>>  
>> -If your switch support the LACP (IEEE 802.3ad) protocol then we recommend using
>> +If your switch supports the LACP (IEEE 802.3ad) protocol then we recommend using
>>  the corresponding bonding mode (802.3ad). Otherwise you should generally use the
>>  active-backup mode.
>>  
>> @@ -490,7 +490,7 @@ iface vmbr0 inet static
>>  
>>  
>>  [thumbnail="default-network-setup-bond.svg"]
>> -Another possibility it to use the bond directly as bridge port.
>> +Another possibility is to use the bond directly as bridge port.
>>  This can be used to make the guest network fault-tolerant.
>>  
>>  .Example: Use a bond as bridge port
> 
> applied, thanks! While adding the missing comma Lukas noted and his R-b.

I also added a follow-up using "as the bridge port" instead of "as
bridge port" while at it.




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