[pve-devel] [PATCH docs] pve-network: correct language errors

[Lukas Wagner]

On  2024-08-13 12:23, Alexander Zeidler wrote:
> Signed-off-by: Alexander Zeidler <a.zeidler at proxmox.com>
> ---
>  pve-network.adoc | 4 ++--
>  1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/pve-network.adoc b/pve-network.adoc
> index acdcf39..434430d 100644
> --- a/pve-network.adoc
> +++ b/pve-network.adoc
> @@ -447,7 +447,7 @@ slaves in the single logical bonded interface such that different
>  network-peers use different MAC addresses for their network packet
>  traffic.
>  
> -If your switch support the LACP (IEEE 802.3ad) protocol then we recommend using
> +If your switch supports the LACP (IEEE 802.3ad) protocol then we recommend using
                                                                   ^
There should be comma here: If ..., then ...

>  the corresponding bonding mode (802.3ad). Otherwise you should generally use the
>  active-backup mode.
>  
> @@ -490,7 +490,7 @@ iface vmbr0 inet static
>  
>  
>  [thumbnail="default-network-setup-bond.svg"]
> -Another possibility it to use the bond directly as bridge port.
> +Another possibility is to use the bond directly as bridge port.
>  This can be used to make the guest network fault-tolerant.
>  
>  .Example: Use a bond as bridge port

Apart from this, this looks good to me:

Reviewed-by: Lukas Wagner <l.wagner at proxmox.com>

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- Lukas