[pve-devel] [PATCH v2 manager] pve7to8: reword and fix typos in description

[Fiona Ebner]

Am 19.04.24 um 18:33 schrieb Alexander Zeidler:
> diff --git a/bin/Makefile b/bin/Makefile
> index 180a91b5..6c5f9b14 100644
> --- a/bin/Makefile
> +++ b/bin/Makefile
> @@ -66,10 +66,10 @@ pve6to7.1:
>  
>  pve7to8.1:
>  	printf ".TH PVE7TO8 1\n.SH NAME\npve7to8 \- Proxmox VE upgrade checker script for 7.4+ to current 8.x\n" > $@.tmp
> -	printf ".SH DESCRIPTION\nThis tool will help you to detect common pitfalls and misconfguration\
> -	 before, and during the upgrade of a Proxmox VE system\n" >> $@.tmp
> -	printf "Any failure must be addressed before the upgrade, and any waring must be addressed, \
> -	 or at least carefully evaluated, if a false-positive is suspected\n" >> $@.tmp
> +	printf ".SH DESCRIPTION\nThis tool will help you detect common pitfalls and misconfigurations\
> +	 before and during the upgrade of a Proxmox VE system.\n" >> $@.tmp
> +	printf "Any failures or warnings must be addressed prior to the upgrade.\n" >> $@.tmp

Nit: "All failures and warnings" sounds slightly better IMHO

> +	printf "If you think that a message is a false-positive for your setup, double-check that before proceeding.\n" >> $@.tmp

The old wording was a bit stronger:
- with the new wording, failures and warnings are put into the same bucket
- I do like the "carefully evaluated" more than a simple "double-check"

>  	printf ".SH SYNOPSIS\npve7to8 [--full]\n" >> $@.tmp
>  	mv $@.tmp $@
>