[pve-devel] [PATCH manager] pve7to8: reword and fix typos in description

[Thomas Lamprecht]

Am 18/04/2024 um 10:03 schrieb Stefan Sterz:
>> +	 before, and during the upgrade of a Proxmox VE system.\n" >> $@.tmp
> 
> i know this is pre-existing, but since you are touching this anyway: the
> comma here is odd, if this was supposed to be an oxford comma (or serial
> comma), please be aware that these only apply in lists of three or more
> items. here we have two lists of two items, so the oxford comma does not
> apply.

yeah, that can be dropped – I often tend to go for the comma if I'm in
doubt, in a hurry, or the like... ^^

> 
>> +	printf "Any failures or warnings must be addressed prior to the upgrade.\n" >> $@.tmp
>> +	printf "If you think that a message is a false-positive, check this carefully before proceeding.\n" >> $@.tmp
> 
> again a matter of personal taste, but "check this carefully" sounds a
> bit clumsy to me. maybe "double-check that the tool is incorrect before
> proceeding".

I'd not suggest the tool being incorrect, rather that one should ensure that
the warning does not apply to one's setup.