[pve-devel] [PATCH docs 2/4] pvecm: Add comma after 'First'
Dominic Jäger
d.jaeger at proxmox.com
Tue Jul 28 11:32:13 CEST 2020
Comma after sequence words like first, next, then, or last.
Signed-off-by: Dominic Jäger <d.jaeger at proxmox.com>
---
pvecm.adoc | 6 +++---
1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
diff --git a/pvecm.adoc b/pvecm.adoc
index e7b36c5..390fb4b 100644
--- a/pvecm.adoc
+++ b/pvecm.adoc
@@ -397,7 +397,7 @@ node from the cluster.
WARNING: Ensure all shared resources are cleanly separated! Otherwise you will
run into conflicts and problems.
-First stop the corosync and the pve-cluster services on the node:
+First, stop the corosync and the pve-cluster services on the node:
[source,bash]
----
systemctl stop pve-cluster
@@ -527,7 +527,7 @@ application.
Setting Up A New Network
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
-First you have to set up a new network interface. It should be on a physically
+First, you have to set up a new network interface. It should be on a physically
separate network. Ensure that your network fulfills the
xref:pvecm_cluster_network_requirements[cluster network requirements].
@@ -957,7 +957,7 @@ configured to do so.
The traffic between the daemon and the cluster must be encrypted to ensure a
safe and secure QDevice integration in {pve}.
-First install the 'corosync-qnetd' package on your external server and
+First, install the 'corosync-qnetd' package on your external server and
the 'corosync-qdevice' package on all cluster nodes.
After that, ensure that all your nodes on the cluster are online.
--
2.20.1
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