[pve-devel] [PATCH v3 docs 00/10] Documenation overhaul chapt. 1.9 to 3.2

Stefan Reiter s.reiter at proxmox.com
Mon Feb 10 10:59:54 CET 2020


Sorry for being a bit late, seeing as 4 patches are already applied, but 
aside from some minor things noted in my other mails: LGTM regarding 
style and content!

Reviewed-by: Stefan Reiter <s.reiter at proxmox.com>

On 2/5/20 3:16 PM, Aaron Lauterer wrote:
> This is the first patch series aimed to overhaul our documentation. The
> main goal is to make it easier to understand and more consistent.
> Therefore the phrasing is changed in a lot of places, sometimes the
> ordering of content as well. I tried to align the source to the 80
> characters per line wherever possible.
> 
> The reason why this first patch series doesn't start at the very
> beginning is because we are not yet happy with few things there.
> 
> v2 -> v3:
> rebased on current master
> 
> v1[0] -> v2:
> 
> * incorporating suggestions received
> * moved line length and white space fixes to separate patch
> 
> [0] https://pve.proxmox.com/pipermail/pve-devel/2019-September/038938.html
> 
> Aaron Lauterer (10):
>    Overhaul Getting Help
>    Overhaul How To Improve Docs
>    Overhaul Translation
>    Overhaul Installation
>    Overhaul System Requirements
>    Overhaul Install from USB flash drive
>    Overhaul Sysadmin
>    Overhaul Package Repositories
>    OVerhaul System Software Updates
>    Fix whitespace and line length
> 
>   getting-help.adoc            |  47 +++---
>   howto-improve-pve-docs.adoc  |  42 +++---
>   pve-installation.adoc        | 274 +++++++++++++++++------------------
>   pve-package-repos.adoc       | 154 ++++++++++----------
>   pve-system-requirements.adoc |  69 ++++-----
>   pve-usbstick.adoc            | 109 +++++++-------
>   sysadmin.adoc                |  40 ++---
>   system-software-updates.adoc |  25 ++--
>   translation.adoc             |  37 ++---
>   9 files changed, 388 insertions(+), 409 deletions(-)
> 



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