[pve-devel] [PATCH docs 9/9] Rewrite System Software Updates

[Oguz Bektas]

hi,

On Tue, Sep 10, 2019 at 11:22:06AM +0200, Aaron Lauterer wrote:
> Polished phrasing and aligned cli command styling
> 
> Signed-off-by: Aaron Lauterer <a.lauterer at proxmox.com>
> ---
>  system-software-updates.adoc | 25 ++++++++++---------------
>  1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/system-software-updates.adoc b/system-software-updates.adoc
> index 04c17f3..bd5ff30 100644
> --- a/system-software-updates.adoc
> +++ b/system-software-updates.adoc
> @@ -4,21 +4,16 @@ ifdef::wiki[]
>  :pve-toplevel:
>  endif::wiki[]
>  
> -We provide regular package updates on all repositories. You can
> -install those update using the GUI, or you can directly run the CLI
> -command `apt-get`:
> +{pve} provides updates on a regular basis for all repositories. To install
> +updates  use the web-based GUI or the following CLI commands:
extra spaces here
>  
> - apt-get update
> - apt-get dist-upgrade
> +----
> +# apt-get update
> +# apt-get dist-upgrade
> +----
>  
> -NOTE: The `apt` package management system is extremely flexible and
> -provides countless of feature - see `man apt-get` or <<Hertzog13>> for
> -additional information.
> +NOTE: The APT package management system is very flexible and provides many
> +features, see `man apt-get`, or <<Hertzog13>> for additional information.
>  
> -You should do such updates at regular intervals, or when we release
> -versions with security related fixes. Major system upgrades are
> -announced at the {forum}. Those announcement also contain detailed
> -upgrade instructions.
> -
> -TIP: We recommend to run regular upgrades, because it is important to
> -get the latest security updates.
> +TIP: Regular updates are essential to get the latest patches and security
> +related fixes. Major system upgrades are announced in the {forum}.
> -- 
> 2.20.1
> 
> 
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