[pve-devel] applied: [PATCH v2 1/2 docs] minor wording improvements/corrections

[Wolfgang Bumiller]

applied

On Fri, Dec 28, 2018 at 02:24:56PM +0100, Oguz Bektas wrote:
> Signed-off-by: Oguz Bektas <o.bektas at proxmox.com>
> ---
>  pve-gui.adoc | 18 +++++++++---------
>  1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/pve-gui.adoc b/pve-gui.adoc
> index 9c282bb..8ff2ff1 100644
> --- a/pve-gui.adoc
> +++ b/pve-gui.adoc
> @@ -258,11 +258,11 @@ All belongs of a node can be managed at this level.
>  
>  * *Summary:* gives a brief overview over the resource usage.
>  
> -* *Shell:* log you in the shell of the node.
> +* *Shell:* logs you into the shell of the node.
>  
>  * *System:* is for configuring the network, dns and time, and also shows your syslog.
>  
> -* *Updates:* will upgrade the system and informs you about new packets.
> +* *Updates:* will upgrade the system and inform you about new packets.
>  
>  * *Firewall:* on this level is only for this node.
>  
> @@ -273,7 +273,7 @@ All belongs of a node can be managed at this level.
>     host. Then you can manage your Ceph cluster and see the status
>     of it here.
>  
> -* *Task History:* here all past task are shown.
> +* *Task History:* here all past tasks are shown.
>  
>  * *Subscription:* here you can upload you subscription key and get a
>     system overview in case of a support case.
> @@ -312,21 +312,21 @@ All available options are listed one below the other.
>  
>  * *(LXC)DNS:* the LXC DNS settings.
>  
> -* *Options:* all VM options can be set here, this distinguishes between KVM and LXC.
> +* *Options:* all guest options can be set here.
>  
> -* *Task History:* here all previous task from this VM will be shown.
> +* *Task History:* here all previous tasks from the selected guest will be shown.
>  
>  * *(KVM) Monitor:* is the interactive communication interface to the KVM process.
>  
> -* *Backup:* shows the available backups from this VM and also create a backupset.
> +* *Backup:* shows the available backups from the selected guest and also create a backupset.
>  
> -* *Replication:* shows the replication jobs for this VM and allows to create new jobs.
> +* *Replication:* shows the replication jobs for the selected guest and allows to create new jobs.
>  
>  * *Snapshots:* manage VM snapshots.
>  
>  * *Firewall:* manage the firewall on VM level.
>  
> -* *Permissions:* manage the user permission for this VM.
> +* *Permissions:* manage the user permission for the selected guest.
>  
>  
>  Storage
> @@ -334,7 +334,7 @@ Storage
>  
>  [thumbnail="screenshot/gui-storage-summary-local.png"]
>  
> -In this view we have a two partition split view.
> +In this view we have a two partition split-view.
>  On the left side we have the storage options
>  and on the right side the content of the selected option will be shown.
>  
> -- 
> 2.11.0