[pve-devel] applied: [PATCH docs] pve-firewall minor corrections

[Thomas Lamprecht]

Am 2/14/19 um 4:18 PM schrieb Oguz Bektas:
> Signed-off-by: Oguz Bektas <o.bektas at proxmox.com>
> ---
>  pve-firewall.adoc | 8 ++++----
>  1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/pve-firewall.adoc b/pve-firewall.adoc
> index bc9df0e..acaca95 100644
> --- a/pve-firewall.adoc
> +++ b/pve-firewall.adoc
> @@ -231,8 +231,8 @@ Here are some examples:
>  IN SSH(ACCEPT) -i net0
>  IN SSH(ACCEPT) -i net0 # a comment
>  IN SSH(ACCEPT) -i net0 -source 192.168.2.192 # only allow SSH from 192.168.2.192
> -IN SSH(ACCEPT) -i net0 -source 10.0.0.1-10.0.0.10 # accept SSH for ip range
> -IN SSH(ACCEPT) -i net0 -source 10.0.0.1,10.0.0.2,10.0.0.3 #accept ssh for ip list
> +IN SSH(ACCEPT) -i net0 -source 10.0.0.1-10.0.0.10 # accept SSH for IP range
> +IN SSH(ACCEPT) -i net0 -source 10.0.0.1,10.0.0.2,10.0.0.3 #accept ssh for IP list
>  IN SSH(ACCEPT) -i net0 -source +mynetgroup # accept ssh for ipset mynetgroup
>  IN SSH(ACCEPT) -i net0 -source myserveralias #accept ssh for alias myserveralias
>  
> @@ -303,7 +303,7 @@ explicitly assign the local IP address
>  ----
>  #  /etc/pve/firewall/cluster.fw
>  [ALIASES]
> -local_network 1.2.3.4 # use the single ip address
> +local_network 1.2.3.4 # use the single IP address
>  ----
>  
>  [[pve_firewall_ip_sets]]
> @@ -471,7 +471,7 @@ address are used. By default the `NDP` option is enabled on both host and VM
>  level to allow neighbor discovery (NDP) packets to be sent and received.
>  
>  Beside neighbor discovery NDP is also used for a couple of other things, like
> -autoconfiguration and advertising routers.
> +auto-configuration and advertising routers.
>  
>  By default VMs are allowed to send out router solicitation messages (to query
>  for a router), and to receive router advertisement packets. This allows them to
> 

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