[pve-devel] [PATCH pve-docs] fix typos/wording
David Limbeck
d.limbeck at proxmox.com
Thu Aug 23 13:48:43 CEST 2018
Signed-off-by: David Limbeck <d.limbeck at proxmox.com>
---
ha-manager.adoc | 28 ++++++++++++++--------------
pveum.adoc | 2 +-
qm.adoc | 8 ++++----
vzdump.adoc | 2 +-
4 files changed, 20 insertions(+), 20 deletions(-)
diff --git a/ha-manager.adoc b/ha-manager.adoc
index 3edbc50..4d38583 100644
--- a/ha-manager.adoc
+++ b/ha-manager.adoc
@@ -137,7 +137,7 @@ resource of type `vm` (virtual machine) with the ID 100.
For now we have two important resources types - virtual machines and
containers. One basic idea here is that we can bundle related software
-into such VM or container, so there is no need to compose one big
+into such a VM or container, so there is no need to compose one big
service from other services, like it was done with `rgmanager`. In
general, a HA managed resource should not depend on other resources.
@@ -156,7 +156,7 @@ GUI, or simply use the command line tool, for example:
The HA stack now tries to start the resources and keeps it
running. Please note that you can configure the ``requested''
-resources state. For example you may want that the HA stack stops the
+resources state. For example you may want the HA stack to stop the
resource:
----
@@ -225,7 +225,7 @@ the following command:
NOTE: This does not start or stop the resource.
-But all HA related task can be done on the GUI, so there is no need to
+But all HA related tasks can be done in the GUI, so there is no need to
use the command line at all.
@@ -253,7 +253,7 @@ handles node fencing.
.Locks in the LRM & CRM
[NOTE]
Locks are provided by our distributed configuration file system (pmxcfs).
-They are used to guarantee that each LRM is active once and working. As a
+They are used to guarantee that each LRM is active once and working. As an
LRM only executes actions when it holds its lock, we can mark a failed node
as fenced if we can acquire its lock. This lets us then recover any failed
HA services securely without any interference from the now unknown failed node.
@@ -369,7 +369,7 @@ The LRM lost its lock, this means a failure happened and quorum was lost.
After the LRM gets in the active state it reads the manager status
file in `/etc/pve/ha/manager_status` and determines the commands it
has to execute for the services it owns.
-For each command a worker gets started, this workers are running in
+For each command a worker gets started, these workers are running in
parallel and are limited to at most 4 by default. This default setting
may be changed through the datacenter configuration key `max_worker`.
When finished the worker process gets collected and its result saved for
@@ -381,19 +381,19 @@ The default value of at most 4 concurrent workers may be unsuited for
a specific setup. For example may 4 live migrations happen at the same
time, which can lead to network congestions with slower networks and/or
big (memory wise) services. Ensure that also in the worst case no congestion
-happens and lower the `max_worker` value if needed. In the contrary, if you
+happens and lower the `max_worker` value if needed. On the contrary, if you
have a particularly powerful high end setup you may also want to increase it.
-Each command requested by the CRM is uniquely identifiable by an UID, when
-the worker finished its result will be processed and written in the LRM
+Each command requested by the CRM is uniquely identifiable by a UID, when
+the worker finishes its result will be processed and written in the LRM
status file `/etc/pve/nodes/<nodename>/lrm_status`. There the CRM may collect
it and let its state machine - respective the commands output - act on it.
The actions on each service between CRM and LRM are normally always synced.
-This means that the CRM requests a state uniquely marked by an UID, the LRM
+This means that the CRM requests a state uniquely marked by a UID, the LRM
then executes this action *one time* and writes back the result, also
identifiable by the same UID. This is needed so that the LRM does not
-executes an outdated command.
+execute an outdated command.
With the exception of the `stop` and the `error` command,
those two do not depend on the result produced and are executed
always in the case of the stopped state and once in the case of
@@ -430,11 +430,11 @@ lost agent lock::
The CRM lost its lock, this means a failure happened and quorum was lost.
-It main task is to manage the services which are configured to be highly
+Its main task is to manage the services which are configured to be highly
available and try to always enforce the requested state. For example, a
service with the requested state 'started' will be started if its not
already running. If it crashes it will be automatically started again.
-Thus the CRM dictates the actions which the LRM needs to execute.
+Thus the CRM dictates the actions the LRM needs to execute.
When an node leaves the cluster quorum, its state changes to unknown.
If the current CRM then can secure the failed nodes lock, the services
@@ -468,7 +468,7 @@ Resources
The resource configuration file `/etc/pve/ha/resources.cfg` stores
the list of resources managed by `ha-manager`. A resource configuration
-inside that list look like this:
+inside that list looks like this:
----
<type>: <name>
@@ -689,7 +689,7 @@ Start Failure Policy
---------------------
The start failure policy comes in effect if a service failed to start on a
-node once ore more times. It can be used to configure how often a restart
+node one or more times. It can be used to configure how often a restart
should be triggered on the same node and how often a service should be
relocated so that it gets a try to be started on another node.
The aim of this policy is to circumvent temporary unavailability of shared
diff --git a/pveum.adoc b/pveum.adoc
index c3eb870..b0bb72a 100644
--- a/pveum.adoc
+++ b/pveum.adoc
@@ -223,7 +223,7 @@ of predefined roles which satisfies most needs.
You can see the whole set of predefined roles on the GUI.
-Adding new roles can currently only be done from the command line, like
+Adding new roles can be done via both GUI and the command line, like
this:
[source,bash]
diff --git a/qm.adoc b/qm.adoc
index 28d2a38..1451f5d 100644
--- a/qm.adoc
+++ b/qm.adoc
@@ -442,7 +442,7 @@ minimum amount you specified is always available to the VM, and if RAM usage on
the host is below 80%, will dynamically add memory to the guest up to the
maximum memory specified.
-When the host is becoming short on RAM, the VM will then release some memory
+When the host is running low on RAM, the VM will then release some memory
back to the host, swapping running processes if needed and starting the oom
killer in last resort. The passing around of memory between host and guest is
done via a special `balloon` kernel driver running inside the guest, which will
@@ -452,14 +452,14 @@ footnote:[A good explanation of the inner workings of the balloon driver can be
When multiple VMs use the autoallocate facility, it is possible to set a
*Shares* coefficient which indicates the relative amount of the free host memory
that each VM should take. Suppose for instance you have four VMs, three of them
-running a HTTP server and the last one is a database server. To cache more
+running an HTTP server and the last one is a database server. To cache more
database blocks in the database server RAM, you would like to prioritize the
database VM when spare RAM is available. For this you assign a Shares property
of 3000 to the database VM, leaving the other VMs to the Shares default setting
of 1000. The host server has 32GB of RAM, and is currently using 16GB, leaving 32
* 80/100 - 16 = 9GB RAM to be allocated to the VMs. The database VM will get 9 *
3000 / (3000 + 1000 + 1000 + 1000) = 4.5 GB extra RAM and each HTTP server will
-get 1/5 GB.
+get 1.5 GB.
All Linux distributions released after 2010 have the balloon kernel driver
included. For Windows OSes, the balloon driver needs to be added manually and can
@@ -516,7 +516,7 @@ of packets transferred.
//http://blog.vmsplice.net/2011/09/qemu-internals-vhost-architecture.html
When using the VirtIO driver with {pve}, each NIC network queue is passed to the
-host kernel, where the queue will be processed by a kernel thread spawn by the
+host kernel, where the queue will be processed by a kernel thread spawned by the
vhost driver. With this option activated, it is possible to pass _multiple_
network queues to the host kernel for each NIC.
diff --git a/vzdump.adoc b/vzdump.adoc
index 193e1cf..fb1ac3d 100644
--- a/vzdump.adoc
+++ b/vzdump.adoc
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ Backup and Restore
:pve-toplevel:
endif::manvolnum[]
-Backups are a requirements for any sensible IT deployment, and {pve}
+Backups are a requirement for any sensible IT deployment, and {pve}
provides a fully integrated solution, using the capabilities of each
storage and each guest system type. This allows the system
administrator to fine tune via the `mode` option between consistency
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