[pve-devel] applied: [PATCH docs 1/4] some small spelling/grammar fixes

Fabian Gr├╝nbichler f.gruenbichler at proxmox.com
Fri Jan 27 11:08:21 CET 2017


applied whole patch set

On Tue, Jan 24, 2017 at 12:10:42PM +0100, Dominik Csapak wrote:
> Signed-off-by: Dominik Csapak <d.csapak at proxmox.com>
> ---
> the networking part is not really a spelling mistake but a copy/paste error
>  ha-manager.adoc                 | 4 ++--
>  pve-disk-health-monitoring.adoc | 2 +-
>  pve-network.adoc                | 3 +--
>  qm.adoc                         | 4 ++--
>  4 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/ha-manager.adoc b/ha-manager.adoc
> index 47fbe7c..db67e59 100644
> --- a/ha-manager.adoc
> +++ b/ha-manager.adoc
> @@ -523,7 +523,7 @@ include::ha-groups-opts.adoc[]
>  
>  [thumbnail="gui-ha-manager-add-group.png"]
>  
> -A commom requirement is that a resource should run on a specific
> +A common requirement is that a resource should run on a specific
>  node. Usually the resource is able to run on other nodes, so you can define
>  an unrestricted group with a single member:
>  
> @@ -568,7 +568,7 @@ group: mygroup2
>  
>  
>  The `nofailback` options is mostly useful to avoid unwanted resource
> -movements during administartion tasks. For example, if you need to
> +movements during administration tasks. For example, if you need to
>  migrate a service to a node which hasn't the highest priority in the
>  group, you need to tell the HA manager to not move this service
>  instantly back by setting the `nofailback` option.
> diff --git a/pve-disk-health-monitoring.adoc b/pve-disk-health-monitoring.adoc
> index 99ba8aa..8ea9d5f 100644
> --- a/pve-disk-health-monitoring.adoc
> +++ b/pve-disk-health-monitoring.adoc
> @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ ifdef::wiki[]
>  :pve-toplevel:
>  endif::wiki[]
>  
> -Altough a robust and redundant storage is recommended,
> +Although a robust and redundant storage is recommended,
>  it can be very helpful to monitor the health of your local disks.
>  
>  Starting with {pve} 4.3, the package smartmontools footnote:[smartmontools homepage https://www.smartmontools.org]
> diff --git a/pve-network.adoc b/pve-network.adoc
> index fd52357..45f6424 100644
> --- a/pve-network.adoc
> +++ b/pve-network.adoc
> @@ -208,8 +208,7 @@ designated slave network interface. If this receiving slave fails,
>  another slave takes over the MAC address of the failed receiving
>  slave.
>  
> -* *Adaptive load balancing (balanceIEEE 802.3ad Dynamic link
> -aggregation (802.3ad)(LACP):-alb):* Includes balance-tlb plus receive
> +* *Adaptive load balancing (balance-alb):* Includes balance-tlb plus receive
>  load balancing (rlb) for IPV4 traffic, and does not require any
>  special network switch support. The receive load balancing is achieved
>  by ARP negotiation. The bonding driver intercepts the ARP Replies sent
> diff --git a/qm.adoc b/qm.adoc
> index 7444661..ed2ab8d 100644
> --- a/qm.adoc
> +++ b/qm.adoc
> @@ -285,7 +285,7 @@ Even when using a fixed memory size, the ballooning device gets added to the
>  VM, because it delivers useful information such as how much memory the guest
>  really uses.
>  In general, you should leave *ballooning* enabled, but if you want to disable
> -it (e.g. for debugging porpuses), simply uncheck
> +it (e.g. for debugging purposes), simply uncheck
>  *Ballooning* or set
>  
>   balloon: 0
> @@ -421,7 +421,7 @@ If a device is present in a VM configuration when the VM starts up,
>  but the device is not present in the host, the VM can boot without problems.
>  As soon as the device/port ist available in the host, it gets passed through.
>  
> -WARNING: Using this kind of USB passthrough, means that you cannot move
> +WARNING: Using this kind of USB passthrough means that you cannot move
>  a VM online to another host, since the hardware is only available
>  on the host the VM is currently residing.
>  
> -- 
> 2.1.4
> 
> 
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