[pmg-devel] [PATCH pmg-docs 1/3] replace "e-mail" with "email"
Thomas Lamprecht
t.lamprecht at proxmox.com
Thu May 27 07:45:07 CEST 2021
On 26.05.21 16:08, Dylan Whyte wrote:
> in accordance with our technical writing guide
applied, thanks, but..
> diff --git a/pmg-planning-deployment.adoc b/pmg-planning-deployment.adoc
> index 0b1c5dd..6d1ab9f 100644
> --- a/pmg-planning-deployment.adoc
> +++ b/pmg-planning-deployment.adoc
> @@ -2,53 +2,53 @@
> Planning for Deployment
> =======================
>
> -Easy integration into existing e-mail server architecture
> +Easy integration into existing email server architecture
> ---------------------------------------------------------
.. heading line needs to be adapted to match in length too, else there may
be some (subtle) breakage in rendering/anchoring
>
> -In this sample configuration, your e-mail traffic (SMTP) arrives on
> -the firewall and will be directly forwarded to your e-mail server.
> +In this sample configuration, your email traffic (SMTP) arrives on
> +the firewall and will be directly forwarded to your email server.
>
> image::images/2018_IT_infrastructure_without_Proxmox_Mail_Gateway_final_1024.png[]
>
> -By using the {pmg}, all your e-mail traffic is forwarded to the
> -Proxmox Mail Gateway, which filters the e-mail traffic and
> -removes unwanted e-mails. You can manage incoming and outgoing mail
> +By using the {pmg}, all your email traffic is forwarded to the
> +Proxmox Mail Gateway, which filters the email traffic and
> +removes unwanted emails. You can manage incoming and outgoing mail
> traffic.
>
> image::images/2018_IT_infrastructure_with_Proxmox_Mail_Gateway_final_1024.png[]
>
>
> -Filtering outgoing e-mails
> +Filtering outgoing emails
> --------------------------
here too.
I fixed those above, and the others introduced, in a followup commit.
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