[pmg-devel] applied: Re: [PATCH pmg-docs 1/2] add minimal queue administration docs

[Thomas Lamprecht]

On 5/25/20 7:59 PM, Stoiko Ivanov wrote:
> describe the buttons and their functions with the most common usage.
> 
> Signed-off-by: Stoiko Ivanov <s.ivanov at proxmox.com>
> ---
>  pmg-administration.adoc | 36 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++-
>  1 file changed, 35 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)
> 
>

applied, thanks! Did quite some followup fixes though:


diff --git a/pmg-administration.adoc b/pmg-administration.adoc
index 18650b1..1dd24f9 100644
--- a/pmg-administration.adoc
+++ b/pmg-administration.adoc
@@ -170,7 +170,7 @@ combines the result from the first and second phase.
 |accepted/delivered   |2 | Email accepted and delivered
 |====
 
-
+[[postfix_queue_administration]]
 Postfix Queue Administration
 ----------------------------
 
@@ -178,16 +178,16 @@ Postfix Queue Administration
 Mail-queues are one of the central concepts of the SMTP protocol. Once a
 mailserver accepts a mail for further processing it saves it to a queue.
 After the mail is either relayed to another system, stored locally
-or discarded it is deleted from the local mail-queue.
+or discarded, it is deleted from the local mail-queue.
 
 If immediate processing is not possible, for example because a downstream
 mailserver is not reachable, the mail remains on the queue for later
 processing.
 
-The Queue Administration view provides a succinct overview, as generated by
-the 'qshape (1)' utility, about the current state of the postfix mail-queue.
+The 'Queue Administration' panel provides an overview about the current state
+of the postfix mail-queue, similar to the 'qshape (1)' command-line utility.
 
-It shows mails for which domains were not delivered, and how long they have
+It shows domains for which mails were not delivered, and how long they have
 been queued.
 
 The three Action Buttons on top provide the most common queue operations:
@@ -200,7 +200,6 @@ server has become available again.
 'Delete All Messages'::
 
 Delete all currently queued mail, for example if the queue contains only spam.
-Attempt to deliver all currently queued mail.
 
 'Discard address verification database'::