[pmg-devel] [PATCH v2 docs] pmg-installation: minor fixups and rephrase some parts

[Thomas Lamprecht]

On 4/21/20 5:07 PM, Oguz Bektas wrote:
> Signed-off-by: Oguz Bektas <o.bektas at proxmox.com>
> Reviewed-By: Aaron Lauterer <a.lauterer at proxmox.com>
> ---
> v1->v2:
> * aaron nit s/can//
> 
>  pmg-installation.adoc | 72 ++++++++++++++++++++-----------------------
>  1 file changed, 33 insertions(+), 39 deletions(-)
> 

applied, but had to go back for some stuff..

> @@ -251,7 +252,7 @@ Install {pmg} as Linux Container Appliance
>  
>  The full functionality of {pmg} can also run on top of a Debian-based LXC
>  instance. In order to keep the set of installed software, and thus the
> -necessary updates, minimal you can use the `proxmox-mailgateway-container`
> +necessary updates minimal, you can use the `proxmox-mailgateway-container`
>  meta-package. It does not depend on any Linux Kernel, firmware, or components
>  used for booting from bare-metal, like grub2.
>  
> @@ -261,18 +262,11 @@ section, so if you already use Proxmox VE you can setup a {pmg} instance in a
>  minute.
>  
>  NOTE: It's recommended to use a static network configuration. If DHCP should be
> -used ensure that the container can always lease the same IP, for example, by
> +used ensure that the container always leases the same IP, for example, by
>  reserving one with the containers network MAC address.
>  
> -Additionally you can also install this on top of a normal Debian installation.
> -After configuring the repositories, you need to run:
> -
> -[source,bash]
> -----
> -apt-get update
> -apt-get install proxmox-mailgateway-container
> -----
> -

I do not like to condense the docs this unnecessarily, it costs nothing to have
this example here, and while yes, there's a very similar how-to already the
distinction between "proxmox-mailgateway" and "proxmox-mailgateway-container" is
not small and thus it warrants it's own example - thus we explicitly added it as such.

Reverted this one back.

> +It is also possible to install {pmg} in a regular Debian LXC or VM, just as you would
> +xref:pmg_install_on_debian[on a normal Debian].

What does VM matter in a section with the heading "Install {pmg} as Linux Container
Appliance" ??