[pmg-devel] [PATCH v2 docs] pmg-mail-filter: grammar, typo, phrasing fixes

Stoiko Ivanov s.ivanov at proxmox.com
Thu Apr 23 11:51:10 CEST 2020


Thanks for the patch !
one general question inline

irrespective of the answer:
Reviewed-By: Stoiko Ivanov <s.ivanov at proxmox.com>

On Thu, 23 Apr 2020 10:18:59 +0200
Oguz Bektas <o.bektas at proxmox.com> wrote:

> also change a confusing example in the regex guide
> 
> Signed-off-by: Oguz Bektas <o.bektas at proxmox.com>
> ---
> v1->v2:
> * aaron fixes
> 
> 
>  pmg-mail-filter.adoc | 38 +++++++++++++++++++-------------------
>  1 file changed, 19 insertions(+), 19 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/pmg-mail-filter.adoc b/pmg-mail-filter.adoc
> index 91e9a00..47410bf 100644
> --- a/pmg-mail-filter.adoc
> +++ b/pmg-mail-filter.adoc
> @@ -14,24 +14,24 @@ certain criteria:
>  
>  'Who' - objects::
>  
> -Who is the sender or receiver of the e-mail? Those objects can be used
> +Who is the sender or receiver of the email? Those objects can be used
>  for the 'TO' and/or 'FROM' category.

:%s/receiver/recipient/g ?

>  +
>  ====
> -Example: EMail-object - Who is the sender or receiver of the e-mail?
> +Example: EMail-object - Who is the sender or receiver of the email?
>  ====
>  
>  'What' - objects::
>  
> -What is in the e-mail?
> +What is in the email?
>  +
>  ====
> -Example: Does the e-mail contain spam?
> +Example: Does the email contain spam?
>  ====
>  
>  'When' - objects::
>  
> -When is the e-mail received by {pmg}?
> +When is the email received by {pmg}?
>  +
>  ====
>  Example: Office Hours - Mail is received between 8:00 and 16:00.
> @@ -42,15 +42,15 @@ Example: Office Hours - Mail is received between 8:00 and 16:00.
>  Defines the final actions.
>  +
>  ====
> -Example: Mark e-mail with “SPAM:” in the subject.
> +Example: Mark email with “SPAM:” in the subject.
>  ====
>  
>  Rules are ordered by priority, so rules with higher priority are
>  executed first. It is also possible to set a processing direction:
>  
> -'In'::	Rule applies for all incoming e-mails
> +'In'::	Rule applies for all incoming emails
>  
> -'Out'::	Rule applies for all outgoing e-mails
> +'Out'::	Rule applies for all outgoing emails
>  
>  'In & Out':: Rule applies for both directions
>  
> @@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ reset the filter rules.
>  
>  [thumbnail="pmg-gui-mail-filter-actions.png", big=1]
>  
> -Please note that some actions stops further rule precessing. We call
> +Please note that some actions stop further rule processing. We call
>  such actions 'final'.
>  
>  Accept
> @@ -125,7 +125,7 @@ removed attachments.
>  Header Attributes
>  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
>  
> -This object is able to add or modify mail header attributes. As notice above, you can use xref:rule_system_macros[macros], making this a very powerful object. For example, the 'Modify Spam Level' actions adds detailed infomation about detected Spam characteristics to the ` X-SPAM-LEVEL` header.
> +This object is able to add or modify mail header attributes. As with notifications above, you can use xref:rule_system_macros[macros], making this a very powerful object. For example, the 'Modify Spam Level' actions adds detailed information about detected Spam characteristics to the `X-SPAM-LEVEL` header.
>  
>  .'Modify Spam Level' Header Attribute
>  ----
> @@ -170,7 +170,7 @@ Add a Disclaimer.
>  [thumbnail="pmg-gui-mail-filter-who-objects.png", big=1]
>  
>  This type of objects can be used for the 'TO' and/or 'FROM' category,
> -and macth the sender or receiver of the e-mail. A single object can
> +and match the sender or receiver of the email. A single object can
>  combine multiple items, and the following item types are available:
>  
>  EMail::
> @@ -191,10 +191,10 @@ This can be used to match the senders IP address.
>  
>  LDAP User or Group::
>  
> -Test if the mail address belong to a specific LDAP user or group.
> +Test if the mail address belongs to a specific LDAP user or group.
>  
>  We have two important 'Who' - objects called 'Blacklist' and
> -'Whitelist'. Those are used in the default ruleset to globally block
> +'Whitelist'. These are used in the default ruleset to globally block
>  or allow specific senders.
>  
>  
> @@ -246,7 +246,7 @@ This also matches the filenames for all regular (non-archived) attachments.
>  [thumbnail="pmg-gui-mail-filter-when-objects.png", big=1]
>  
>  'When' - objects are use to activate rules at specific daytimes. You
> -can compose them of one or more time-frame items.
> +can compose them of one or more time frame items.
>  
>  The default ruleset defines 'Office Hours', but this is not used by
>  the default rules.
> @@ -274,15 +274,15 @@ Metacharacters
>  Some characters have a special meaning. These characters are called
>  metacharacters.  The Period (`.`) is a commonly used metacharacter. It
>  matches exactly one character, regardless of what the character is.
> -`e.mail` would match either "e-mail" or "e-mail" or "e2mail" but not
> -"e-some-mail".
> +`e.mail` would match either "e-mail" or "e2mail" but not
> +"e-some-mail" or "email".
>  
>  The question mark (`?`) indicates that the character immediately
> -preceding it either zero or one time. `e?mail` would match
> +preceding it shows up either zero or one time. `e?mail` would match
>  either "email" or "mail" but not "e-mail".
>  
>  Another metacharacter is the star (`*`). This indicates that the
> -character immediately to its left may repeated any number of times,
> +character immediately preceding it may be repeated any number of times,
>  including zero. `e*mail` would match either "email" or "mail" or
>  "eeemail".
>  
> @@ -296,4 +296,4 @@ including the null string. For example: `.*company.*` matches
>  "company at domain.com" or "company at domain.co.uk" or
>  "department.company at domain.com".
>  
> -The book xref:Friedl97[] provides a more comprehensive introduction.
> \ No newline at end of file
> +The book xref:Friedl97[] provides a more comprehensive introduction.




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