[pmg-devel] [PATCH docs] pmg-planning-deployment: minor fixups in grammar and understandability

[Aaron Lauterer]

LGTM, one nit regarding grammer inline. With that fixed,

Reviewed-By: Aaron Lauterer <a.lauterer at proxmox.com>

On 4/20/20 4:22 PM, Oguz Bektas wrote:
> Signed-off-by: Oguz Bektas <o.bektas at proxmox.com>
> ---
>   pmg-planning-deployment.adoc | 30 +++++++++++++++---------------
>   1 file changed, 15 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/pmg-planning-deployment.adoc b/pmg-planning-deployment.adoc
> index 23040cc..a72995a 100644
> --- a/pmg-planning-deployment.adoc
> +++ b/pmg-planning-deployment.adoc
> @@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ the firewall and will be directly forwarded to your e-mail server.
>   image::images/2018_IT_infrastructure_without_Proxmox_Mail_Gateway_final_1024.png[]
>   
>   By using the {pmg}, all your e-mail traffic is forwarded to the
> -Proxmox Mail Gateway, which filters the whole e-mail traffic and
> +Proxmox Mail Gateway, which filters the e-mail traffic and
>   removes unwanted e-mails. You can manage incoming and outgoing mail
>   traffic.
>   
> @@ -21,13 +21,13 @@ image::images/2018_IT_infrastructure_with_Proxmox_Mail_Gateway_final_1024.png[]
>   Filtering outgoing e-mails
>   --------------------------
>   
> -Many e-mail filter solutions do not scan outgoing mails. Opposed to
> -that {pmg} is designed to scan both incoming and outgoing
> -e-mails. This has two major advantages:
> +Many e-mail filtering solutions do not scan outgoing mails. In contrast, {pmg} is
> +designed to scan both incoming and outgoing e-mails. This has two major
> +advantages:
>   
>   . {pmg} is able to detect viruses sent from an internal host. In many
>   countries you are liable for sending viruses to other
> -people. The {pmg} outgoing e-mail scanning feature is an additional
> +people. Outgoing e-mail scanning feature is an additional
s/feature//
or
s/Outgoing/The outgoing/

>   protection to avoid that.
>   
>   . {pmg} can gather statistics about outgoing e-mails too. Statistics
> @@ -41,17 +41,17 @@ statistics can show you this important information. A solution which
>   does not scan outgoing e-mail cannot do that.
>   
>   To enable outgoing e-mail filtering you just need to send all outgoing
> -e-mails through your {png} (usually by specifying Proxmox as
> -"smarthost" on your e-mail server.
> +e-mails through your {pmg} (usually by specifying Proxmox as
> +"smarthost" on your e-mail server).
>   
>   [[firewall_settings]]
>   Firewall settings
>   -----------------
>   
> -In order to pass e-mail traffic to the {pmg} you need to allow traffic
> -on the SMTP the port. Our servers use the Network Time Protocol (NTP)
> -for time synchronization, RAZOR, DNS, SSH, HTTP and port 8006 for the web
> -based management interface.
> +In order to pass e-mail traffic to the {pmg} you need to allow traffic on the
> +SMTP port. Our software uses the Network Time Protocol (NTP) for time
> +synchronization, RAZOR, DNS, SSH, HTTP and port 8006 for the web-based
> +management interface.
>   
>   [options="header"]
>   |======
> @@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ based management interface.
>   |GUI/API |8006    |TCP      |Intranet   |Proxmox
>   |======
>   
> -CAUTION: It is advisable to restrict access to the GUI/API port as far
> +CAUTION: It is advised to restrict access to the GUI/API port as far
>   as possible.
>   
>   The outgoing HTTP connection is mainly used by virus pattern updates,
> @@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ System Requirements
>   -------------------
>   
>   The {pmg} can run on dedicated server hardware or inside a virtual machine on
> -any of the following plattforms:
> +any of the following platforms:
>   
>   * Proxmox VE (KVM)
>   
> @@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ any of the following plattforms:
>   
>   * KVM (virtio drivers are integrated, great performance)
>   
> -* Virtual box™
> +* VirtualBox™
>   
>   * Citrix Hypervisor™ (former XenServer™)
>   
> @@ -150,5 +150,5 @@ To use the web interface you need a modern browser, this includes:
>   * Firefox, a release from the current year, or the latest Extended
>   Support Release
>   * Chrome, a release from the current year
> -* Microsofts currently supported version of Edge
> +* Microsoft's currently supported version of Edge
>   * Safari, a release from the current year
>