[pmg-devel] applied: [PATCH docs] Some language improvements for the deployment chapter

[Thomas Lamprecht]

On 2/19/19 11:08 AM, Christian Ebner wrote:
> Signed-off-by: Christian Ebner <c.ebner at proxmox.com>
> ---
>  pmg-planning-deployment.adoc | 6 +++---
>  1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/pmg-planning-deployment.adoc b/pmg-planning-deployment.adoc
> index e48cbe2..e71097f 100644
> --- a/pmg-planning-deployment.adoc
> +++ b/pmg-planning-deployment.adoc
> @@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ e-mails. This has two major advantages:
>  
>  . {pmg} is able to detect viruses sent from an internal host. In many
>  countries you are liable for not sending viruses to other
> -people. {pmg} outgoing e-mail scanning feature is an additional
> +people. The {pmg} outgoing e-mail scanning feature is an additional
>  protection to avoid that.
>  
>  . {pmg} can gather statistics about outgoing e-mails too. Statistics
> @@ -35,9 +35,9 @@ about incoming e-mails looks nice, but they are quite
>  useless. Consider two users, user-1 receives 10 e-mails from news
>  portals and wrote 1 e-mail to a person you never heard from. While
>  user-2 receives 5 e-mails from a customer and sent 5 e-mails
> -back. Which user do you consider more active? I am sure its user-2,
> +back. Which user do you consider more active? I am sure it's user-2,
>  because he communicates with your customers. {pmg} advanced address
> -statistics can show you this important information. Solution which
> +statistics can show you this important information. A solution which
>  does not scan outgoing e-mail cannot do that.
>  
>  To enable outgoing e-mail filtering you just need to send all outgoing
> 

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