[pve-devel] [PATCH docs v2 0/5] improve & unify installation(-related) documentation

Christoph Heiss c.heiss at proxmox.com
Mon Mar 11 13:29:06 CET 2024


This series in short tries to bring the documentation for the
ISO installation flow and anything related to it in line the with
respective documentation for PMG. As both products use the same
installer (minus small differences such as LVM options and BTRFS
support) and overall same basic system setup, it is worth unifying them.

There is (of course) still room for improvement, esp. regarding the apt
repo/update section as pointed out by Alex. Still like to get this in
rather sooner than later, to not diverge even more.

I'll send the appropriate pmg-docs series (see v1 of that [0]) when this
has been finalized & applied, to keep it transparent and easier to
reason about.

[0] https://lists.proxmox.com/pipermail/pmg-devel/2024-March/002870.html

Revision history
----------------
v1: https://lists.proxmox.com/pipermail/pve-devel/2024-March/062056.html

Notable changes v1 -> v2:
  * dropped already-applied patches
  * slight rewording in some places based on suggestions

Christoph Heiss (5):
  package-repos: improve wording partly based on pmg-docs
  installation: iso: improve & align wording with pmg-docs
  installation: lvm-options: improve & align wording with pmg-docs
  installation: zfs-options: improve & align wording with pmg-docs
  installation: iso: reflow location and password dialog screenshots

 pve-installation.adoc  | 144 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++---------------
 pve-package-repos.adoc |  26 ++++----
 2 files changed, 107 insertions(+), 63 deletions(-)

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