[pve-devel] [PATCH docs 8/9] installation: zfs-options: improve & align wording with pmg-docs

Christoph Heiss c.heiss at proxmox.com
Mon Mar 4 14:22:15 CET 2024


These changes are the result of basically "diffing" both documentations,
choosing the better prased/sounding sections. Some wording were also
slightly changed as necessary to further improve them.

The equivalent changes will be done for pmg-docs too, to ensure they are
really the same in the end.

Signed-off-by: Christoph Heiss <c.heiss at proxmox.com>
---
 pve-installation.adoc | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/pve-installation.adoc b/pve-installation.adoc
index c6acc75..a94eb3b 100644
--- a/pve-installation.adoc
+++ b/pve-installation.adoc
@@ -294,10 +294,10 @@ lvmthin snapshots).
 [[advanced_zfs_options]]
 Advanced ZFS Configuration Options
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
-The installer creates the ZFS pool `rpool`. No swap space is created but you can
-reserve some unpartitioned space on the install disks for swap. You can also
-create a swap zvol after the installation, although this can lead to problems.
-(see <<zfs_swap,ZFS swap notes>>).
+The installer creates the ZFS pool `rpool`, if ZFS is used. No swap space is
+created but you can reserve some unpartitioned space on the install disks for
+swap. You can also create a swap zvol after the installation, although this can
+lead to problems (see xref:zfs_swap[ZFS swap notes]).
 
 `ashift`::
 
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2.43.0





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