[pmg-devel] [PATCH pmg-docs 3/4] faq: language fixup

[Dylan Whyte]

minor fixup for the FAQ section

Signed-off-by: Dylan Whyte <d.whyte at proxmox.com>
---
 pmg-faq.adoc | 24 ++++++++++++------------
 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)

diff --git a/pmg-faq.adoc b/pmg-faq.adoc
index c3dbd0e..162a221 100644
--- a/pmg-faq.adoc
+++ b/pmg-faq.adoc
@@ -22,12 +22,12 @@ What distribution is {pmg} based on?::
 What license does the {pmg} project use?::
 
 {pmg} code is licensed under the GNU Affero General Public License,
-version 3 (since the 5.0 release).
+version 3 (as of the 5.0 release).
 
 Will {pmg} run on a 32bit processor?::
 
 {pmg} works only on 64-bit CPUs (AMD or Intel). There is no plan
-for 32-bit for the platform.
+for 32-bit platform support.
 
 [[faq-support-table]]
 How long will my {pmg} version be supported?::
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ How long will my {pmg} version be supported?::
 {pmg} versions are supported at least as long as the corresponding
 Debian Version is
 https://wiki.debian.org/DebianOldStable[oldstable]. {pmg} uses a
-rolling release model and using the latest stable version is always
+rolling release model, and using the latest stable version is always
 recommended.
 +
 [width="100%",cols="5*d",options="header"]
@@ -47,12 +47,12 @@ recommended.
 |===============================================================================
 
 NOTE: {pmg} releases before 5.0 are not listed here. As they are all EOL (End
-Of Life), it's highly recommended to upgrade to a newer version if still in use.
+Of Life), it's highly recommended to upgrade to a newer version, if still in use.
 
 [[faq-upgrade]]
 How can I upgrade {pmg} to the next release?::
 
-Minor version upgrades, for example upgrading from {pmg} in version 5.1
+Minor version upgrades, for example, upgrading from {pmg} version 5.1
 to 5.2, can be done just like any normal update, either through the
 __Node -> Updates__ panel or through the command line with:
 +
@@ -61,15 +61,15 @@ apt update
 apt full-upgrade
 ----
 +
-NOTE: Always ensure you correctly set up the
-xref:pmg_package_repositories[package repositories] and only continue with the
-actual upgrade if `apt update` did not hit any error.
+NOTE: Always ensure that you correctly set up the
+xref:pmg_package_repositories[package repositories], and only continue with the
+actual upgrade if `apt update` did not hit any errors.
 +
-Major version upgrades, for example going from {pmg} 5.4 to 6.0, are
-also supported. They must be carefully planned and tested and should
-*never* be started without having a current backup ready.
+Major version upgrades, for example, going from {pmg} 5.4 to 6.0, are
+also supported. They must be carefully planned and tested, and should
+*never* be started without having an up-to-date backup ready.
 Although the specific upgrade steps depend on your respective setup, we
-provide general instructions and advice of how a upgrade should be
+provide general instructions and advice on how an upgrade should be
 performed:
 +
 * https://pmg.proxmox.com/wiki/index.php/Upgrade_from_6.x_to_7.0[Upgrade from {pmg} 6.x to 7.0]
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