[pmg-devel] [PATCH docs] important service daemons: fix typos and grammar

Stoiko Ivanov s.ivanov at proxmox.com
Thu Apr 23 11:54:41 CEST 2020


Thanks for the patch!

one comment inline...

rest LGTM

On Thu, 23 Apr 2020 10:48:35 +0200
Oguz Bektas <o.bektas at proxmox.com> wrote:

> Signed-off-by: Oguz Bektas <o.bektas at proxmox.com>
> ---
>  pmg-smtp-filter.adoc | 2 +-
>  pmgmirror.adoc       | 4 ++--
>  pmgpolicy.adoc       | 2 +-
>  pmgproxy.adoc        | 8 ++++----
>  4 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/pmg-smtp-filter.adoc b/pmg-smtp-filter.adoc
> index a0727f7..153178e 100644
> --- a/pmg-smtp-filter.adoc
> +++ b/pmg-smtp-filter.adoc
> @@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ pmg-smtp-filter - Proxmox SMTP Filter Daemon
>  ============================================
>  endif::manvolnum[]
>  
> -This is the Proxmox SMTP filter daemon, which does the actual SPAM
> +This is the Proxmox SMTP filter daemon, which does the actual spam
>  filtering using the SpamAssassin and the rule database. It listens on
>  127.0.0.1:10023 and 127.0.0.1:10024. The daemon listens to a local
>  address only, so you cannot access it from outside.
> diff --git a/pmgmirror.adoc b/pmgmirror.adoc
> index 9ce93f8..2f2c12d 100644
> --- a/pmgmirror.adoc
> +++ b/pmgmirror.adoc
> @@ -23,8 +23,8 @@ pmgmirror - Database Mirror Daemon
>  ==================================
>  endif::manvolnum[]
>  
> -{pmg} use an application specific asynchronous replication
> -algorythm to replicate the database to all cluster nodes.
> +{pmg} uses an application specific asynchronous replication
> +algorithm to replicate the database to all cluster nodes.
>  
>  The daemon uses the ssh tunnel provided by 'pmgtunnel' to access
>  the database on remote nodes.
> diff --git a/pmgpolicy.adoc b/pmgpolicy.adoc
> index d013047..813ed9e 100644
> --- a/pmgpolicy.adoc
> +++ b/pmgpolicy.adoc
> @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ pmgpolicy - Proxmox Mail Gateway Policy Daemon
>  endif::manvolnum[]
>  
>  This daemon implements the Postfix SMTP access policy delegation
> -protocol on `127.0.0.1:10022`. The daemon listens to a local address
> +protocol on `127.0.0.1:10022`. It listens to a local address
>  only, so you cannot access it from outside. We configure Postfix to
>  use this service for greylisting and as SPF policy server.
>  
> diff --git a/pmgproxy.adoc b/pmgproxy.adoc
> index 0c088e5..8b1e535 100644
> --- a/pmgproxy.adoc
> +++ b/pmgproxy.adoc
> @@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ certificate with your own (please include the key inside the '.pem' file).
>  Host based Access Control
>  -------------------------
>  
> -It is possible to configure ``apache2''-like access control
> +It is possible to configure Apache2-like access control
>  lists. Values are read from file `/etc/default/pmgproxy`. For example:
>  
>  ----
> @@ -75,10 +75,10 @@ You can define the cipher list in `/etc/default/pmgproxy`, for example
>  
>   CIPHERS="ECDHE-ECDSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384:ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384:ECDHE-ECDSA-CHACHA20-POLY1305:ECDHE-RSA-CHACHA20-POLY1305:ECDHE-ECDSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256:ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256:ECDHE-ECDSA-AES256-SHA384:ECDHE-RSA-AES256-SHA384:ECDHE-ECDSA-AES128-SHA256:ECDHE-RSA-AES128-SHA256"
>  
> -Above is the default. See the ciphers(1) man page from the openssl
> +Above is the default. See the `ciphers(1)` man page from the `openssl`
>  package for a list of all available options.
>  
> -Additionally you can define that the client choses the used cipher in
> +Additionally you can define the order that the client chooses the used cipher in
you can define that the client chooses in which order the ciphers are used
(else the server chooses)

>  `/etc/default/pmgproxy` (default is the first cipher in the list available to
>  both client and `pmgproxy`):
>  
> @@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ COMPRESSION
>  -----------
>  
>  By default `pmgproxy` uses gzip HTTP-level compression for compressible
> -content, if the client supports it. This can disabled in `/etc/default/pmgproxy`
> +content if the client supports it. This can be disabled in `/etc/default/pmgproxy`
>  
>   COMPRESSION=0
>  




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